Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Why theological study is necessary

A recent discussion with a friend gave me an interesting perspective on theology — that for Christians, theology is arguably dangerous and subversive.  Scholarly study of the Bible undermines the mandate that the Good Book was divinely inspired and divinely authored.  

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Tuesday, September 20, 2011 Sunday, September 11, 2011

Enduring Memory

luce-felice:

Original Short Story

Comments: I wish I could add more to it, expand and edit - but I got real close to the largest word limit and I don’t wanna get in trouble for going over. I’d love to know what you guys think of it.

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Hey!  Cathy linked me to this so I figured I’d toss in a few of my comments (especially if the assignment’s not due just yet).  In general I think your language is very mature and your descriptions are kept short and simple — nothing is too bulky, as it should be in a short story, with no rookie mistakes like spending a paragraph on your characters’ hair.  Your authorial voice has developed enough to lend you a cohesive narrative tone as well.

I do have to question opening such a short (almost a vignette, I’d say) work on a description of grass, though.  Your goal should be to get your readers interested from the get-go; you don’t have a lot of time to get across any themes, characterization, etc.  If the readers aren’t interested right away, they’re not going to buy into the short.  To that point, all the heavy exposition and reminiscence isn’t really working here.  You seem to be trying to double up on telling Durante’s family history with whatever action is going on in the present (I was honestly unclear on that present action by the time I got done).  

However, you do seem to have something developing here.  Although I think you would serve better writing a much longer piece if you wanted to keep the same ideas intact, there are clear fragments of good, engaging character sketches here. Right now, you have too much sitting in the past and too little working to keep the action rolling in the present, but with a little work, I think this can definitely be written on more solid ground. 

One of the difficult things about writing short stories is balancing the development of your character with the brevity of the piece.   This seems more like a snippet of a novel than a self-contained story, and so it keeps begging for expansion.  You might be better off to separate into two ideas the experiences Durante has.  Either write a story about an episode from his childhood life (one, not as many as you detail here) or expand on the current scene, only revealing what’s necessary to understand what’s going on in the present.  Although Durante’s family history might be important to his development as a character, all that is past and we’re concerned about who he is now. We don’t need to know so much about him to get a good read.

If you split this up into smaller, more developed pieces, you could actually produce a larger number of better short stories (or expand on it for a much longer piece). With a lot of editing and a little polish, you definitely have something here. Keep working and you should have quite the finished product.

Monday, April 11, 2011 Wednesday, April 6, 2011

The Resurrection

As we draw closer to Holy Week, thoughts inevitably turn to the death and resurrection of Christ.  Resurrection has been understood as Christ returning, body and soul, from the dead to fulfill the Scripture.  But, as always is with the Bible, there’s a ton of important symbolism behind the bodily return of Christ that often gets missed in the priest’s attempt to capture the beauty of the Easter miracle and Christ’s sacrifice to the will of God.  

Going back to the very first moment after Christ’s death, we see evidence of the other, arguably more important aspect of his Resurrection.  Once Christ has died, the centurion keeping watch over Golgotha “praised God and said, “Surely this was a righteous man’” (Lk 23:47).  Two things of note here — first, a Roman, who was a filthy heathen in the eyes of the Hebrews, converts to Christ’s faith.  Second, Christ has just established his first post-death follower.

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Friday, April 1, 2011

The Passion, the Cross, and Sin

So I’ve been working my way through the Synoptic Gospels in conjunction with a few texts on Church history!  April’s a boatload of fun.  

On the whole, the notion of sin has been played very loudly when in reference to Christ’s death and resurrection.  In Protestant circles, Christ’s death has been so individualized that certain denominations argue that our sins are Christ’s wounds.

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Thursday, March 24, 2011 Thursday, March 10, 2011

Genesis and the Catholic theology of the body

So I had the urge last night to go find a copy of John Paul II’s seminal Theology of the Body, which despite its importance for the philosophical and theological world, seems to have gone largely overlooked because of its absolutely difficult writing.  And believe me, it’s tough.  I’ve since downloaded a handful of commentaries to help me out in my reading.  John Paul wrote layers and layers of tradition and meaning into his work, and even just starting out, it’s a difficult read. 

But before I drove off into the wild with JPII, I found myself reflecting on how much our understanding of body and soul has evolved over the centuries.  Imagine the writer of Genesis and how different he must have seen our bodies!

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Monday, March 7, 2011

The Character of the Divine in Exodus

So, it’s been a long time and a handful of reading since the last time I posted anything not about vegetables.  Since then, I’ve worked my way up through the Pentateuch, except for Numbers (which I started last night!).  One of the things I found unusual in Exodus, though, was how much the character of God swings between Genesis and the story of Moses. 

We’ve established through the reading of Genesis that God is respectful of human free will.  Rather than act as a punisher, He lets the consequences of mankind’s actions carry themselves out to their ends.  Well, once we climb out way into Moses’ interactions with Pharaoh in Exodus, things change a bit.  In every one of the ten plagues, God tells Moses He will make the Pharaoh “obstinate” —God intends to harden the Pharaoh’s heart in order to glorify Himself through the plagues and the eventual freedom of the Israelites.

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Tuesday, February 22, 2011